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on When an amenable young man gets cold feet on the eve of his wedding, he incurs the wrath of his jilted bride's unhinged family and is forced to literally fight for his freedom.

Thank you for your reply! I also wondered about the word ?amenable?, it was between that and ?spineless?. Maybe ?spineless? works better? To give you some background on my script, the protagonist lives in a small town, is sheltered (by…
on When an amenable young man gets cold feet on the eve of his wedding, he incurs the wrath of his jilted bride's unhinged family and is forced to literally fight for his freedom.

Thank you for your reply! I also wondered about the word 'amenable', it was between that and 'spineless'. Maybe 'spineless' works better? To give you some background on my script, the protagonist lives in a small town, is sheltered (by…
on When an amenable young man gets cold feet on the eve of his wedding, he incurs the wrath of his jilted bride's unhinged family and is forced to literally fight for his freedom.

Yes, it's an action/comedy and the violence leans more towards slapstick, ie. the hero gets into a Jackie Chan/Rush Hour style martial arts fight with his groomsmen. You could be right about adding/changing some keywords to really hammer home the…