Davron

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4 loglines
7 reviews

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After a series of volcanic explosions and earthquakes unleashes the 'Shaadowars', a race of monsters born from the depths of the world. The human race who inhabits the world has waged a brutal war for survival. An Australian Knight unsuspectingly teams up with a young Aboriginal boy who has the key to ending the devastating war and drag the world back from darkness.

June 18, 2015
A year after the end of a bitter war between mysterious creatures and the human race, a knight in outback Australia discovers a mysterious aboriginal boy, together they learn the grim reality that the war is far from over.

May 28, 2015
In a future where writing is forbidden and technology rules, the last Scribe, and an Android implanted with humanities history must stop an evil corporation from enslaving the masses with its latest device.

February 17, 2015
The last Scribe in a technology ruled false utopian future must unite with an android that contains the entirety of human history, before the ruling corporation can enact their final technological control onto the masses.

February 14, 2015

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on In a future where writing is forbidden and technology rules, the last Scribe, and an Android implanted with humanities history must stop an evil corporation from enslaving the masses with its latest device.

I'm starting to understand what you mean Craig. DPG, its a future that is fully technologically controlled, there is simply no need for writing. This is already becoming more evident in our current day, I've just taken it to the…
on In a future where writing is forbidden and technology rules, the last Scribe, and an Android implanted with humanities history must stop an evil corporation from enslaving the masses with its latest device.

Thanks heaps again Craig, you seem to be a shining light in this logline writing process. I get what you mean about the device, fresh eyes really do help. This does sound much better, In a future where writing is…
on A mysterious boy is on the run after having his identity discovered. But will he escape from the prospect of the hunters chasing him every second.

This is an interesting idea, needs to be a bit clearer with what is going to happen, also needs something fresh that'll make it stand out.
on The last Scribe in a technology ruled false utopian future must unite with an android that contains the entirety of human history, before the ruling corporation can enact their final technological control onto the masses.

Thanks for all the tips and help guys, I have been told to keep it at 27 words or less, is that an actual thing? Trying to stuff all the info in seems tough, 33 is the shortest I have…
on The last Scribe in a technology ruled false utopian future must unite with an android that contains the entirety of human history, before the ruling corporation can enact their final technological control onto the masses.

In a future where writing is banned and technology dominates, the last Scribe and an Android must prevent the controlling Corporation from unleashing its latest device onto the masses. Or that one.
on The last Scribe in a technology ruled false utopian future must unite with an android that contains the entirety of human history, before the ruling corporation can enact their final technological control onto the masses.

In a technology ruled future where writing is outlawed, a Scribe, and an Android implanted with humanities hidden past, must prevent the controlling corporation from unleashing its technological control onto the masses. That is a revised version.
on The last Scribe in a technology ruled false utopian future must unite with an android that contains the entirety of human history, before the ruling corporation can enact their final technological control onto the masses.

Thanks for the comment and suggestions, first time I've attempted a logline. Will make some changes and post them shortly, cheers for the advice.