davidnobles
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This sounds more so like a concept rather than a premise for a film. What is this character's desire, goal, or want? What is his call to action/inciting incident? Also, when you say "things will change", what are those things?…
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I'm curious what his want is? It doesn't seem like it is to get better because it seems he's already accepted his fate. Is his desire for a peaceful death? I new environment? Also, how does he perceive life from…