Danny
Penpusher · 20 points
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- 5 reviews
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Thank you Richie, I added it but couldn't form a correct sentence to fit it, that's why I ended like this. The previous one was, " An African-American family moves into a small gated community faces racial discrimination, raises their…
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Yes thank you odie, Actually it happens in US and teacher is a US citizen and his girlfriend is First generation indian from US not a student Yes trick part is actually the hook which is finally revealed The Student…
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Hey Mate, Its perfect, Thank you I'm still unclear with my Plot what to reflect and what not to Please find this revised one, i've added few lines “A lovelorn high school teacher is being tricked by his student and…
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Hey Richie Thanks for your review Its my first time, I'm learning things slowly I have made a revised one by given 3 reviews and added few lines “A lovelorn high school teacher is being tricked by his student and…
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Hey Odie, Thanks for your review Haha, No culture accepts a student Teacher relationship Actually its a different story, I was not clear before But I have made a revised one by given 3 reviews and added few lines "A…