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On the eve of his gay uncle?s anniversary dinner, Marcus must again struggle with alcohol and the impact it continues to have on the family.
Thank you for the imput - makes sense
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On the eve of his gay uncle?s anniversary dinner, Marcus must again struggle with alcohol and the impact it continues to have on the family.
First you tell me to absolutely reveal the uncles to be Gay, now you say it's incidental - you confuse me with your advise.
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On the eve of his gay uncle?s anniversary dinner, Marcus must again struggle with alcohol and the impact it continues to have on the family.
Thank you - I am going to go back to some of my original lines. I will repost shortly
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On the eve of their 50th wedding anniversary dinner, Uncles Mark and Robert, help their family come to terms with alcoholism, an issue threatening to destroy a beloved nephew.
Okay..... Is this more of what you are wanting to see/read? On the eve of his gay uncle?s anniversary dinner, Marcus must again battle with alcohol and the impact it continues to have on the family; all the while celebrating…
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On the eve of their 50th wedding anniversary dinner, Uncles Mark and Robert, help their family come to terms with alcoholism, an issue threatening to destroy a beloved nephew.
Excellent! Thank you for your help and advise
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When a young woman foresees her community?s catastrophic doom, she must choose between keeping a solemn promise – and telling the life-saving truth.
Strong not string....sorry :-)
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On the eve of their 50th wedding anniversary dinner, Uncles Mark and Robert, help their family come to terms with alcoholism, an issue threatening to destroy a beloved nephew.
Really? It's not implied that the uncles are the ones celebrating and that they being two men are in fact a Gay couple? Is it necessary to point out such an obvious detail?
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On the eve of their 50th wedding anniversary dinner, Uncles Mark and Robert, help their family come to terms with alcoholism, an issue threatening to destroy a beloved nephew.
Hmmm....incudung all that, wouldn't that make it more of a synopsis than a logline? On the eve of their 50th wedding anniversary dinner, Uncles Mark and Robert, help their family come to terms with alcoholism, an issue threatening to destroy…
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After gaining superpowers, a group of clumsy and incompetent young adults set out to become the world?s first supervillains, but must first gain control over their city from the corrupt, but powerful superheroes who protect it.
Interesting idea, but not sure I can follow the story from your logline. Seems a bit confusing to have two sets of bad guys as it were....all be it one set not as bad as the other.
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On the eve of their 50th wedding anniversary dinner, Uncles Mark and Robert, help their family come to terms with alcoholism, an issue threatening to destroy a beloved nephew.
Done and done :-)
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On the eve of their 50th wedding anniversary dinner, Uncles Mark and Robert, help their family come to terms with alcoholism, an issue threatening to destroy a beloved nephew.
Fair enough - things for me to think about. Thank you
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An incompetent manager but brilliant schemer is late to a meeting and blames his absence on a death in the family of a new employee; paranoid that the company owner will discover all his previous lies, his actions to cover up this lie become more and more radical.
A tad long and wordy. Interesting idea however.....
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When he learns that his partner has a borderline personality disorder a depressed guy uses unconventional methods to fix a relationship disrupted by a cloud of mental illness.
Could be interesting, but needs more clarity.
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When a young woman foresees her community?s catastrophic doom, she must choose between keeping a solemn promise – and telling the life-saving truth.
Not sure I understand the story. Who did she make this amazingly string promise to, and why is it worth the lives of all those in the community?
