craigwchenery

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on When Heaven accidentally causes an army of demons to be unleashed on the town of Oceanview, God is forced to visit Earth with disastrous results. Title: God Just Wanted To Play Golf

Good points.? God is part of an ensemble cast, as is Death, Lucifer and a bunch of humans.? When God arrives, he finds himself bound by the rules of the bible and humans are unable to look at him, else…
on A top cop receives a rookie partner to help him to down a drug cartel after losing his old partner to the same cartel.

The three questions I'd have echo the other statements, who is reckless and why is the other cop turning in their badge. If the main cop is reckless, how can he or she keep their? partner alive?
on When her older husband dies of viagra overdose, leaving her cuffed on the bed frame, a sexually frustrated woman must break free or die alone in their isolated lake house.

I saw this movie and enjoyed it.? I don't think "old", "sexually frustrated" and "die alone" are needed.? ?The reference to Viagra infers old or older.? ?Sexual frustration isn't necessary as being tied to the bed implies they are trying…
on A straight laced police detective must track down a serial killer brutally murdering children’s TV presenters.

What makes the cop stand out? Does he/she change during the course of the investigation to become less so?? Does being straight laced affect the investigation? What does this trait bring to the table? Cheers! Craig