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on Two recently unemployed nerds get more than they ask for when they fake a UFO encounter to generate publicity for their start-up business.

I think this is a really good logline as it really pulls people in. However, maybe you would like to add more about what business they are in that would require publicity with UFOs? It might paint a clearer image…
on A man with alzheimer disease, is wanted by his family while he is lost in the city.

Having just watched 'A Separation' recently, is the old man the main character? If he is, how does the audience relate and emote to him? What are the conflicts that the family will face? Could make for an emotional story…