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A pair of abused siblings exact revenge against their parents in an attempt to find their long lost sister whom they believe is hidden somewhere in the family home – Precious Little Things
Good feedback, I'll consider your suggestions : )
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A pair of abused siblings exact revenge against their parents in an attempt to find their long lost sister whom they believe is hidden somewhere in the family home – Precious Little Things
Jim Carrey, that would be a very different movie.
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Guy Foster (codename: RAZORMOOSE) is framed for a tourist massacre by the syndicate of sin hunting his telepathic antlers. Fleeing John Law, Guy must clear his name.
What are telepathic antlers? Maybe just say "Guy Foster, a hired mercenary, is framed for a tourist massacre by a clandestine organization who wants Guy's secret weapon. Fleeing the Law, Guy must clear his name." Make it a little more…
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A pair of abused siblings exact revenge against their parents in an attempt to find their long lost sister whom they believe is hidden somewhere in the family home – Precious Little Things
I'm glad you like it. it's already written I'm just practicing the logline as we are getting ready to pitch it around town soon.
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After a meteor has hit a school the government decides to whipe out all the students because of radiation warning. It is up to Kevin and his new found friends to escape before the exterminators can get to them. But will Kevin's side quest to find his little sister come in the way of their survival?
How about CLASS DISMISSED as a title option.
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After a twisted psychopath is murdered, an evil entity targets the current lineage of those responsible to husk, and kill them to sate his revenge.
Why not just say "skinning" his prey alive instead of "shucking". Shucking makes me think of oysters not people.
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As a series of devastating terrorist attacks are waged on American soil and the citizens of a nation in shock looks to their Government for reassurance, word publicly gets out that one of the embedded terrorists is negotiating a defection directly with the President's wife in return for the violence to stop.
Whose the protagonist and whose the antagonist in this film? It seems that your logline is centered on time and place more than people, try centering it on the people involved and their conflicts with each other. Let the war…
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After a young archeologist discovers an ancient tablet, a group of immortal assassins hunt him down. The Guardian stands in their way.
Pretty good, my only suggestion is even more description (Ex. ancient sumerian tablet) and fit in where it takes place as that will help paint a picture as well. Also, what's the Guardian? Is he the protector of the ancient…
