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When a woman and her newborn are placed into quarantine, feared they are infected by the darkness which has devastated their homeworld. She escapes and gains the support of followers to free her twisted child from the prime evil which is bent on possessing their entire species.
Yes the story is a total mind F#$@. Think I will stick with the last one for now. Thanks guys!
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When a woman and her newborn are placed into quarantine, feared they are infected by the darkness which has devastated their homeworld. She escapes and gains the support of followers to free her twisted child from the prime evil which is bent on possessing their entire species.
Or perhaps this version that a former mentor just had a go at: Set in the future, a mother escapes an alien test facility, rallies the pockets of surviving tribes to find the only one able to save what is…
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When a woman and her newborn are placed into quarantine, feared they are infected by the darkness which has devastated their homeworld. She escapes and gains the support of followers to free her twisted child from the prime evil which is bent on possessing their entire species.
Based on the combined feedback I can see my last post is way too long. Just going from what FFF has offered with his formula breakdown I have simplified it into this = In the future a mother escapes an…
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When a woman and her newborn are placed into quarantine, feared they are infected by the darkness which has devastated their homeworld. She escapes and gains the support of followers to free her twisted child from the prime evil which is bent on possessing their entire species.
thanks FFF ill have a go at filling it in with your structure to see what i come up with
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When a woman and her newborn are placed into quarantine, feared they are infected by the darkness which has devastated their homeworld. She escapes and gains the support of followers to free her twisted child from the prime evil which is bent on possessing their entire species.
Thanks guys, this better? Yes I am on the second draft currently 110 pages. One hundred years in the future a mother is separated from her newborn and held against her will. She must escape then unite the surviving clans…
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When a woman and her newborn are placed into quarantine, feared they are infected by the darkness which has devastated their homeworld. She escapes and gains the support of followers to free her twisted child from the prime evil which is bent on possessing their entire species.
Yea there are mal bad and bene good forces in play.
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When a woman and her newborn are placed into quarantine, feared they are infected by the darkness which has devastated their homeworld. She escapes and gains the support of followers to free her twisted child from the prime evil which is bent on possessing their entire species.
How about this?.. In a dystopian future a mother must unite the surviving clans before showing her estranged daughter she was created by benevolent aliens to contain a prime evil force which is taking over the minds of the remaining…
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When a woman and her newborn are placed into quarantine, feared they are infected by the darkness which has devastated their homeworld. She escapes and gains the support of followers to free her twisted child from the prime evil which is bent on possessing their entire species.
Thanks guys working on it now. I have taken all these pointers into consideration. Loglines are not one of my fortes and really appreciate it!
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When a woman and her newborn are placed into quarantine, feared they are infected by the darkness which has devastated their homeworld. She escapes and gains the support of followers to free her twisted child from the prime evil which is bent on possessing their entire species.
Great Lucius. Thanks for the feedback. I'm afraid by disclosing the details you point out it will be giving away too much of the film. Plus it is already very word heavy as far as loglines go for room to…
