ChrisH13

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When he is rejected by the girl of his dreams, a teenager by the name of Tom Weldon must deal with the depression that follows, and the taunts of the asshole who beat her him to her.

July 13, 2012

on A pair of abused siblings exact revenge against their parents in an attempt to find their long lost sister whom they believe is hidden somewhere in the family home – Precious Little Things

Sounds good man. Hate me for it by all means, but when I read this I think comedy. Jim Carrey is the dad in my head. Just thought I'd share that...
on A fallen angel bored with immortality creates havoc on earth, until he meets his match in a comical schoolboy.

Sounds funny. I think it's the most concise it's gonna get as a log line, so I don't know how it can be improved on other then to give a better sense of who the angel and the schoolboy are,…
on When a young, money-driven, surrogate mother finds out that both of the biological parents were killed in an accident, she is left to decide wether or not to keep the child.

Genuinely liking this idea. I'm given the sense money is a major factor and I'd like to understand why though.
on Two friends have a serendipitous encounter with a Caribbean musician, in one of London's many parks, only to discover the bitter sweet truth about life through the lyricism of their new found friend.

I like it, it's intriguing and it poses questions in my mind. I want to know more about these two friends, and what gives so much power to the musicians words. Nice job thus far.