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A short-tempered aspiring hunter gets her dominant arm torn off after saving a friend and must cope with it if she is to ever become the best in the western world.

October 1, 2014

on A short-tempered aspiring hunter gets her dominant arm torn off after saving a friend and must cope with it if she is to ever become the best in the western world.

Alright. Thanks=)
on A short-tempered aspiring hunter gets her dominant arm torn off after saving a friend and must cope with it if she is to ever become the best in the western world.

It did a fair bit. Thank you.
on A short-tempered aspiring hunter gets her dominant arm torn off after saving a friend and must cope with it if she is to ever become the best in the western world.

Thank you=) Will have to look over that, got something more suitable in mind.
on In the aftermath of divorce, an immortal, inflexible man needs to navigate the complex dating scene of the 21st century after 200 year of marriage if he is to ever find love again.

I feel that I can't add anything more than what nicholasandrewhalls have said. I just want to emphasize what he said about the stakes bit, why does he want to find love, what happens if he doesn't manage to do…
on After failing his final mission to receive his wings and graduate to guardianship, an angel must work with his client – a depressed mime ? to help him discover reasons to continue living and to fulfill his own quest of becoming a guardian angel.

Hello. The immediate thing I wonder, what happens to be the angels flaw?/what does his character arc look like? Is he perhaps impulsive, reckless, crazy? I like the overall idea.