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True story of a brilliant professional gambler and the owner of an elegant sporting parlor defending his life against a evil U.S.Marshal, who in a jealous rage is seeking out a personal vendetta in the American south during the late 1880's.
Well awesome, if you liked "Unforgiven" you would probably dig this one as well...thank you for you input I found it most helpful.
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True story of a brilliant professional gambler and the owner of an elegant sporting parlor defending his life against a evil U.S.Marshal, who in a jealous rage is seeking out a personal vendetta in the American south during the late 1880's.
A prostitute nailed to an outhouse door horrifies a town and sparks a clash of wills between a gambler, his cohorts of famous killers, and a corrupt U.S. Marshal in 1887..any better?
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True story of a brilliant professional gambler and the owner of an elegant sporting parlor defending his life against a evil U.S.Marshal, who in a jealous rage is seeking out a personal vendetta in the American south during the late 1880's.
Jim please provide your opinion on this "Old west gambler Luke Short conspires against Jim Courtright a corrupt U.S. Marshal in the American south in 1887"... does adding the identity of the historical figures make this any better?
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A smart, new classy version of an old west historical tale that has never been told, between a well-dressed clean man of small stature and his dirty giant brutal enemy with a personal vendetta;of which takes place in a large alluring and immaculately clean gambling hall and infamous brothel, where heaven and hell plays about.
That was the best opinion...I need to dumb it down and get to the point. Thank you..please tell me your thoughts on this "'True story of a brilliant professional gambler and owner of an elegant sporting parlor that defends his…
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A smart, new classy version of an old west historical tale that has never been told, between a well-dressed clean man of small stature and his dirty giant brutal enemy with a personal vendetta; all of which takes place in a large alluring and immaculately clean gambling hall and infamous brothel, where heaven and hell plays out.
how about this "A never before seen historical vendetta between a professional gambler and a corrupt U.S. Marshal plays out inside the walls of the elegant white elephant gambling hall and infamous brothel where heaven and hell merge." .....is that…
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A smart, new classy version of an old west historical tale that has never been told, between a well-dressed clean man of small stature and his dirty giant brutal enemy with a personal vendetta;of which takes place in a large alluring and immaculately clean gambling hall and infamous brothel, where heaven and hell plays about.
hmmmm...ok how about this "A never before seen historical vendetta between a professional gambler and a corrupt U.S. Marshal plays out inside the walls of the elegant white elephant gambling hall and infamous brothel where heaven and hell merge." .....is…
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Nearing the end of his parole and looking to put his criminal past behind him, an ex-con?s plans are derailed by the arrival of two former prison buddies, one with a bullet wound and the other with a plan to rob the local bank.
Sounds good, Its very close to "Raising Arizona" with bullet wounds and possibly could be a serious drama or potential dark comedy. Maybe try and boil it down just a wee bit "At the end of his parole a ex-cons…
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A smart, new classy version of an old west historical tale that has never been told, between a well-dressed clean man of small stature and his dirty giant brutal enemy with a personal vendetta;of which takes place in a large alluring and immaculately clean gambling hall and infamous brothel, where heaven and hell plays about.
Agree...how do you like "A never before told historical battle between a David and Goliath separated by vendettas and set against an elegant gambling hall and infamous brothel where heaven and hell play out.".....any better?
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A pair of abused siblings exact revenge against their parents in an attempt to find their long lost sister whom they believe is hidden somewhere in the family home – Precious Little Things
This idea may have been played out, but so what! Just about everything else has been and people will always go to the movies to see the same thing over and over. I think your Log Line is great, short…
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A smart, new classy version of an old west historical tale that has never been told, between a well-dressed clean man of small stature and his dirty giant brutal enemy with a personal vendetta;of which takes place in a large alluring and immaculately clean gambling hall and infamous brothel, where heaven and hell plays about.
Thank you for your feedback! I always respect and look forward to all comments. I am not as impressed with my idea, as much as others around me are that have cracked it open. I have been told the different…
