Brennan McMahon

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189 points to Logliner

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on When his own handgun is used to kill his partner, an unassuming detective defies the police department by refusing to carry a gun, even as he pursues the killer.

I've seen enough Law & Order to know that the dept wouldn't let the detective investigate his partner's murder, especially if his gun is the murder weapon. Perhaps he takes a leave of absence and goes after the killers on…
on After learning his mother is dying due to lack of healthcare coverage and money, a promising med student abruptly quits school to compete in a dangerous TV show offering $1 million to the lone survivor who is still alive at the end of the game.

I like the implied conflict between the med student's future career as a doctor juxtaposed to his lack of faith in the very healthcare system that would sustain him. As others have said, logline is a bit wordy, but that's…
on After a near death accident leaves a man with the ability to see behind the veil, he soon finds his real mission is to stop a unique werewolf from tearing apart the veil and destroy reality.

After an accident leaves [John] clinging between life and death, he's mysteriously given special abilities to fight devious creatures behind the veil in order to save himself - and everyone else. My two cents. Story sounds very interesting.