Bodhi

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"Set in a futuristic world where humans are controlled by their fascist government, a career criminal gets drawn into a deadly plot when he rescues a upper class woman from the secret police and has to depend on her to survive."

November 6, 2013
An diligent scientist on his last routin mission in space before return home to his beloved daughter, Goes out of his way to save an familiar but mysterious woman from getting killed by here own people.

October 31, 2013

on "Set in a futuristic world where humans are controlled by their fascist government, a career criminal gets drawn into a deadly plot when he rescues a upper class woman from the secret police and has to depend on her to survive."

dpg: thx for the notes. In a Fascist future, a career criminal gets contacted by a swanky woman who needs his skillset to take over power of the government, and offers him the location of his lost daughter if he…
on "Set in a futuristic world where humans are controlled by their fascist government, a career criminal gets drawn into a deadly plot when he rescues a upper class woman from the secret police and has to depend on her to survive."

what I?m trying to get to in my logline is that i want this man to become one with the system he hates to take it down, but he is an criminal so he needs a good reason to do…
on "Set in a futuristic world where humans are controlled by their fascist government, a career criminal gets drawn into a deadly plot when he rescues a upper class woman from the secret police and has to depend on her to survive."

Thx for the comments guys! Made some changes to the logline: "In a Fascist future, a career criminal on the run, gets caught by secret police and learns from an upper class woman in prison solitary that the only way…