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Two strangers find themselves in an abandoned town, Penance Peak, and as the sun begins to set, they begin to realise that their dark secrets can?t stay hidden forever.
When they find themselves stranded? in an abandoned town, two strangers must...? i mean this is the basic formula but you need to explain what the major action is.? is it vampires? is it zombies? is it drug smugglers? is…
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When her mother is brutally murdered, a family woman must find out who her mother was, in order to uncover what happened; but when a cult from her mother’s secret past starts to infiltrate her life , she must Mary and her family must escape indoctrination or risk becoming victims themselves.
When her mother is brutally murdered, a family woman must find out who her mother was, in order to uncover what happened; but when a cult from her mother's secret past starts to infiltrate her life , She must save…
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When her mother is brutally murdered, a family woman must find out who her mother was, in order to uncover what happened; but when a cult from her mother’s secret past starts to infiltrate her life , she must Mary and her family must escape indoctrination or risk becoming victims themselves.
yeah its more of a demonic vibe. Without the demons. hearts ripped out does sound a little too dramatic, but i see what you're saying i think you're right. . i will rethink and re post...thank you. thats a massive…
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A recently engaged vain sports star is forced to compete in a drag queen competition. After a wealthy psychopath out bids him on an auction record breaking painting by a famous outsider artist.
its an interesting set up. but i would leave out the recently engaged, its too many things to describe him. sounds a bit clunky. i would also like to know what the mid point reversal would be?
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When her mother is brutally murdered, a family woman must find out who her mother was, in order to uncover what happened; but when a cult from her mother’s secret past starts to infiltrate her life , she must Mary and her family must escape indoctrination or risk becoming victims themselves.
i forgot to delete "she must"
