BeyondVision

Penpusher · 86 points

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In a world, where a city is constantly tormented by superhuman creatures called enigmas, three young adults, a cocky hothead, a blunt but caring diplomat, and an energetic adrenaline junkie, discover they?re a part of the enigma population but decide to use their powers to defend Apollo City.

February 21, 2020

on An airline crew smuggling a $2 million diamond on board begins to get murdered one by one. [Title: Fight or Flight}

Think about what makes this different than any other smuggling film. That's what I would want to hear in the logline.
on disguising as a viking, a good hearted monk survives a pillage. Taken back to the viking village, he struggles to teach them moral principles before they attack his hometown again.

I feel as if this could be described better and that you could use less sentences.