benjaminjonah

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on When a young, money-driven, surrogate mother finds out that both of the biological parents were killed in an accident, she is left to decide wether or not to keep the child.

Thank you for your comments. I definatly don't want the story to be focused on an inward journey. I just need to find a better way to show that through the logline without making it too long or confusing. Thanks…