Ben

Recent reviews

• on When he notices that the camera-man on set is an alien planning on taking over the world, the percipient lead actor must convince the rest of the crew to save the planet.

  Be careful on the length of your piece, this story could be written at any length. Aside from that it's a really well written logline.

• on When his family is ripped apart by a sociopathic outlaw, a resented young man must face his past to save their lives

  Logline Revised: When his family is ripped apart by a sociopathic outlaw, a resented young man must out run the darkness to save his family's lives.