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When akward Miles Morales,ascends as the next spiderman he is forced to use his new powers to stop the Evil Kingpin,from attaining the master-key of the doomsday collider that threatens to vanish humanity into the abyss.

April 20, 2022

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The start of the logline is good and logical,but there is no high stakes.
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You need the setting.
on Acting in concert, birds start attacking people for no apparent reason.

Who is the protagonist?
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I don't see the conflict.
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What is the conflict and stakes?