arvid97

Penpusher · 56 points

244 points to Logliner

on When a lovable teacher looses her job, she must steal her sister’s identity in order to apply and get her old job back.

I really like the set-up and dilemma! A stolen identity story is always exciting, and I can't remember having seen it in this setting. What exactly must the teacher do when she's stolen her sister's identity, part from going on…
on When exiled from his town, a duplicitous man must confront his identity.

Sounds cool but you could add some stakes and a clearer goal to make it easier to visualize :)
on When the daughter of an ex-CIA agent is kidnapped by human traffickers, he must hunt them down and save her before she gets sold as a sex slave. ? Taken

Clear goal and stakes, I like it very much.