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on "Enemy at the Gates" meets spaghetti western.

Ofcourse it does, but actually the more I think about a sniper movie the more clich?ful (pardon my new word!) it seems. I'm actually stopping the work on this script. I have a lot of interesting war stories from my…
on A seemingly ideal Bible Belt family man, is shaken to the core by a secret romance with a handsome young country and western singer that brings him his first real happiness, and the potential to destroy his life and the lives of everyone around him.

The overall plot seems very interesting and I see the conflict in there. But you should try to shorten the logline, you do not need to say "destroy his life and the lives of everyone around him" you can simply…
on A scared monster accidentally destroys tokyo and now must rebuild the city while avoiding capture from a crazy zoologist.

You tried to be original and that's cool, you used irony and that's cool aswell.. But as I try to imagine myself being somebody who has to choose what movie to produce or a simple person trying to decide what…