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on When orphan Billy and his friends accidentally land on Carnival Cloud they discover Cloud Surfing, Pirate Kingdoms, Pet Paradise, a school with bully boats, new friends and that anything?s possible…now to find a way home.

Thank-you for our time and thoughts, truly appreciated. Your suggestion re "community of friends that grows into a family" captures the essence as in the first scene they are taken in by the family that run Carnival Cloud (Mum Dad…
on A young African-American woman and her family flee from her violent father in 1960s deep south. Amidst rock star fame in the 1970s, however, she discovers that she may be the very thing she had hated as a child.

What I gain from your logline is a young woman overcomes a hellish childhood & it sounds like she moves her whole family into a better life but then this is threatened when she starts to act like her father…
on After his brother kills a crooked cop in self-defence, an idealistic detective fights for their survival against the entire force, led by his old commanding officer.

I know I'd be in for action and suspense with the clear obstacles then a more personal attachment offered with the brotherly bond. I want to read more.