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• on In an apocalyptic winter filled with zombies, Juliet is on a rampage to kill Romeo at all costs.

  Alright. I'm clearly outnumbered. While I do put those themes in the script, the themes would not be shown in a Wikipedia synopsis, or at leastvery little would so to speak. Looking through it again I see it more than…

• on In an apocalyptic winter filled with zombies, Juliet is on a rampage to kill Romeo at all costs.

  The story is that Romeo and Juliet were once together and madly. The thing that separates them is what also created the zombies, an experiment led by Romeo. It's also in this that he betrays Juliet by killing her brother.…

• on In an apocalyptic winter filled with zombies, Juliet is on a rampage to kill Romeo at all costs.

  Unlike Pride and Predjudice and Zombies, which is the exactly Jane Austen story with zombies shoe horned in (as well as being aimed as mire of a comedy as far as I know), this script is more like Oh Brother…

• on In an apocalyptic winter filled with zombies, Juliet is on a rampage to kill Romeo at all costs.

  I guess my hook is for the people hearing the logline to ask why. To hint that there is a reason that the famous star crossed female lover suddenly wants revenge but not say it would allow the listener to…

• on In an apocalyptic winter filled with zombies, Juliet is on a rampage to kill Romeo at all costs.

  Problem is Nir Shelter, it's not a comedy. The screenplay is more of a plain ol' action with a dash of deep Shakespearean thinking.

• on In an apocalyptic winter filled with zombies, Juliet is on a rampage to kill Romeo at all costs.

  So this is I guess what you could call a second draft: In an apocalyptic winter filled with zombies, Juliet is on revenge fueled rampage to kill Romeo at all costs.

• on A retired homicide detective must figure out why everybody below the age of 65 have died at their computers, which are all running a pointless game where avatars are stalked and killed by a monster. To make matters worse there’s nobody left to run the nursing home, food is running out, and Mrs Everett needs to go to the bathroom.

  You got a great concept there. I suggest though that you add a hint as to either why he retired too old for this shit or dramatic backstory) or hint at the connection of why the detective himself must be…

• on In an apocalyptic winter filled with zombies, Juliet is on a rampage to kill Romeo at all costs.

  Thank you. If I wrote the script any other way, that would be perfect.