Angie
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on When it seems his past will destroy his future, a successful young man turns vigilante.
Hi! I'm not a pro in logline so this is just my opinion. Using the verb "seems" feels unclear and it feels like your logline is missing a real clear action. I don't understand the reason why he turns vigilante.…