Andrew_east

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on A Nuclear Physicist turned to iron while saving the planet from destruction is shunned and betrayed by the world he saved and now seeks his revenge.

I read the logline anf though: "Hey, that's the Black Sabbath song", then I saw the title, ha! And I guess it's good, I liked it, very concise, then again I'm no expert.
on A fraud investigator must go to Europe and through Siberian catacombs to find out the truth about her father who mastermind an international criminal heist

Hi! First time reviewing loglines here: I think you could trim down the: "And trough Siberian catacombs", and instead tell us what happens if she doesn't find her father, or WHY does she need to find the truth about him.