Aimeedis

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(1930 – rural France) While growing up, a solitary boy, tries to make sense of life by making toy models of the world around him. The chance encounters he has with a roaming peddler changes his look on life forever.

August 28, 2012
A unpredictable woman wanders into the live of an unconventional and disillusioned psychiatrist, by giving up her identity she start them off on a profound journey to comprehend the meaning of her live. With his help she finds her answers and leaves him with his own questions.

June 10, 2012

on A unpredictable woman wanders into the live of an unconventional and disillusioned psychiatrist, by giving up her identity she start them off on a profound journey to comprehend the meaning of her live. With his help she finds her answers and leaves him with his own questions.

A new rewrite: An unpredictable woman, gives up her identity and wanders into the life of a disillusioned psychiatrist. Her questions starts them off on a profound journey to comprehend the meaning of life.
on A unpredictable woman wanders into the live of an unconventional and disillusioned psychiatrist, by giving up her identity she start them off on a profound journey to comprehend the meaning of her live. With his help she finds her answers and leaves him with his own questions.

Sorry, I did pick up on those while rewriting? again. Being Dutch living in France you could say English is my second language, ?
on Shaming his family whilst alive is nothing compared to what they have to overcome now that Lee's dead and unwed.

maybe you should say something about why this being unwed is a problem. Is there a kid? What is the nature of the problems the family has to deal with, emotional, material, technical?