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A terminally ill ex-con seeks revenge on the partner who double-crossed him and killed his girlfriend.

August 8, 2014

on When terrorists kidnap his family, a self-centered pilot is blackmailed into hijacking a plane. But when the flight is delayed and the FBI nab him, he cuts a deal to save the lives of everyone on board by sabotaging the hijacking – at the cost of his family's lives.

You just blew a major moment in your film.
on A terminally ill ex-con seeks revenge on the partner who double-crossed him and killed his girlfriend.

I like the "week left to live" Because I wasn't really feeling "terminally ill."
on A scientist made slave to a government UFO reverse engineering project must escape before the ones who created the craft come back to get what is theirs.

What exactly is a Reverse UFO engineering project?
on Evan was once heralded as a front page success story for his popular smartphone game, ?Cat Pipe?. But ten years later, he finds himself living in unemployed obscurity with his slacker best friend and ?artist? in residence, Andy. What goes up must come down. Way down.

I don't think you need to add the "what comes up" line