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In a world where a new species of human suffers discrimination and containment, a young and erratic Control Officer for the Registry meets a sadistic yet charming bi-species man and builds a partnership that threatens to expose the lies at the foundation of the organization?s operations.
>>The federal agent is human. His name is Rove. The crime boss is half-human, half-nothos. His name is Lux. Rove and Lux have a business arrangement where they exchange information?Rove offers Lux a heads up about certain government activities, and…
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In a world where a new species of human suffers discrimination and containment, a young and erratic Control Officer for the Registry meets a sadistic yet charming bi-species man and builds a partnership that threatens to expose the lies at the foundation of the organization?s operations.
The logline doesn't say that the agent is a nothos. Unless the wording here "As the government struggles to contain a mutant species, the Homo nothos (false man), one of its federal agents" is what is confusing? I guess it…
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In a world where a new species of human suffers discrimination and containment, a young and erratic Control Officer for the Registry meets a sadistic yet charming bi-species man and builds a partnership that threatens to expose the lies at the foundation of the organization?s operations.
Sorry for another double reply, but this one actually identifies a threat that's more in line with the story, and still indicates that one of the main characters is a female (one with a definite and conflicting mission). It's a…
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In a world where a new species of human suffers discrimination and containment, a young and erratic Control Officer for the Registry meets a sadistic yet charming bi-species man and builds a partnership that threatens to expose the lies at the foundation of the organization?s operations.
Well, the species isn't contagious (since they're a species and all and not a disease) and all the agents have nothos partners. However, I reworked it with your format in mind. How about: In order to contain and cure a…
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In a world where a new species of human suffers discrimination and containment, a young and erratic Control Officer for the Registry meets a sadistic yet charming bi-species man and builds a partnership that threatens to expose the lies at the foundation of the organization?s operations.
Sorry to reply twice, but I reworked the logline to include the partner better: As the government struggles to contain a new mutant species, the Homo nothos (false man), one of its young federal agents works to prove himself by…
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In a world where a new species of human suffers discrimination and containment, a young and erratic Control Officer for the Registry meets a sadistic yet charming bi-species man and builds a partnership that threatens to expose the lies at the foundation of the organization?s operations.
I do have difficulty with vagueness, so I appreciate the headsup. Is this one better: As the government struggles to contain a new mutant species, the Homo nothos (false man), one of its young federal agents works to prove himself…
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In a world where a new species of human suffers discrimination and containment, a young and erratic Control Officer for the Registry meets a sadistic yet charming bi-species man and builds a partnership that threatens to expose the lies at the foundation of the organization?s operations.
Ah, I see. You asked about the sci-fi elements and the nothos boss, which is why I never mentioned the female characters. Within the logline not all the main characters can be named and for a concept to appeal to…
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In a world where a new species of human suffers discrimination and containment, a young and erratic Control Officer for the Registry meets a sadistic yet charming bi-species man and builds a partnership that threatens to expose the lies at the foundation of the organization?s operations.
Do you mean is there a female character as a main? The agent's (Rove's) partner is female, and a nothos, and her storyline is the development of her identity and the gaining of her freedom from Rove and the Registry.…
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In a world where a new species of human suffers discrimination and containment, a young and erratic Control Officer for the Registry meets a sadistic yet charming bi-species man and builds a partnership that threatens to expose the lies at the foundation of the organization?s operations.
Yes, being "half-human" is a bit different from being "nothos" because the character is actually half-human, half-nothos, which is probably how it should be phrased in the logline if I decide to stick with that terminology. The character is also…
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In a world where a new species of human suffers discrimination and containment, a young and erratic Control Officer for the Registry meets a sadistic yet charming bi-species man and builds a partnership that threatens to expose the lies at the foundation of the organization?s operations.
I've watered the logline down to more generic terminology and currently have two different versions: 1) In modern day Chicago, a young federal agent must play a delicate game of lies and seduction with one of his country?s greatest threats,…
