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A drug addicted rich kid breaks into an unsuspecting college students parents home who is home from college due to a just diagnoses of severe diabetic. The situation takes a turn for the worse as a hot shot negotiator tries to prove himself rather than save the girl, who falls into diabetic shock slowly as the hostage taker battles withdraw symptoms. The ending of this terrible situation is tragic and carries swift punishment, no one will ever be the same.
I tried to put irony in the second draft by having the hostage not care about his life... Originally I wanted the hostage taker to be the protagonist and the negotiator be the antagonist, then I decided maybe the hostage…
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A drug addicted rich kid breaks into an unsuspecting college students parents home who is home from college due to a just diagnoses of severe diabetic. The situation takes a turn for the worse as a hot shot negotiator tries to prove himself rather than save the girl, who falls into diabetic shock slowly as the hostage taker battles withdraw symptoms. The ending of this terrible situation is tragic and carries swift punishment, no one will ever be the same.
Thanks for all the answers! Here is my revision: A misguided thief finds himself in a hostage situation with a suicidal drug addict who rather see them both die than get out alive.
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A drug addicted rich kid breaks into an unsuspecting college students parents home who is home from college due to a just diagnoses of severe diabetic. The situation takes a turn for the worse as a hot shot negotiator tries to prove himself rather than save the girl, who falls into diabetic shock slowly as the hostage taker battles withdraw symptoms. The ending of this terrible situation is tragic and carries swift punishment, no one will ever be the same.
Thanks for the feedback so far. I'm rewriting as we speak.
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A drug addicted rich kid breaks into an unsuspecting college students parents home who is home from college due to a just diagnoses of severe diabetic. The situation takes a turn for the worse as a hot shot negotiator tries to prove himself rather than save the girl, who falls into diabetic shock slowly as the hostage taker battles withdraw symptoms. The ending of this terrible situation is tragic and carries swift punishment, no one will ever be the same.
Um... Drug addicted rich kid. Girl is more symbolic, hence death in end. How to make protagonist more clear...ideas?
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When a mass murder shuts down production on an Arctic oil rig, an ambitious young oil exec is charged with managing the crisis only to be thrust into a battle for survival as an ancient fungus co-opts the first responders turning them into violent spore spreading rapists.
To be honest when I read that first line about a mass murder shutting down the Arctic oil rig the fungus part turned me off. When I clicked on the logline I just had the impression it might be a…
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Given the challenge of escorting colossal machines across hostile lands, a small group of unexpected heroes manage to have a lot of fun, get into a lot of trouble, and save the world.
What time frame? What genre (feels sci-fi...but better to know) ? Why care about band of main protagonists (flaws)? What is clearly at stake? Please write this movie, don't loose the part of escorting the machinery that was the draw…
