A.C. Smith

24 points

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on Whilst on a quest to capture the legendary Bunyip, an amateur botanist uncovers a small town’s dark secret that he probes at his peril.

Not bad. The Bunyip doesn't mean anything to me as a word, so perhaps a better replacement would be the same format as for the main character (role and description), but that's just me. It seems the core of the…
on A high school English teacher faces a moral crisis when he accidentally sleeps with the mom of a new student.

It's good - short, punchy and intriguing, but I additionally want to know the stakes for him. It's a moral crisis, sure, but how? What specifically is at stake for him, or what does he have to overcome or what…