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A relentless Class President investigates the disappearances of fellow female students only to find out a once beloved Teacher holds them captive, unable to prove him guilty to the Police she is forced to use herself as bait to lure him into a trap.
>>unable to prove him guilty..."She doesn't have to prove anything. ?It's not her job. All she has to do is report the missing people and her suspicions, provide clues and probable cause for the police to investigate.And surely she isn't the only one who has noticed or would go to the police.Read more
>>unable to prove him guilty…”
She doesn’t have to prove anything. ?It’s not her job. All she has to do is report the missing people and her suspicions, provide clues and probable cause for the police to investigate.
And surely she isn’t the only one who has noticed or would go to the police. ?Parents of the missing students would surely be calling the police.
I, for one, don’t find the setup credible that with a pack of concerned parents screaming at them to find their kids. the police would fail to vigorously investigate, would ignore or discount any clue anyone brings forward.
See lessA corrupt PR agent flees to his sleepy hometown after inheriting his father’s derelict hotel and unites with the mischievous ghost of his suicidal first guest to scare off a vindictive property developer.
"Scare off" ?seems incomplete and negative in terms of an objective goal. ?So he scares the developer off. ?Then what? What's at stake? ?What is his objective goal beyond scaring off the developer?Since he's corrupt, why wouldn't he take the money from the developer and run? ?Why would he want the hRead more
“Scare off” ?seems incomplete and negative in terms of an objective goal. ?So he scares the developer off. ?Then what? What’s at stake? ?What is his objective goal beyond scaring off the developer?
Since he’s corrupt, why wouldn’t he take the money from the developer and run? ?Why would he want the hassle of dealing with a mischievous ghost?
See lessWhen a young man takes a decision to marry against a will of his controlling and psychotic mother, his girlfriend mysteriously disappears.
And then what happens? The logline sets up a situation for a plot. ?But it doesn't describe a plot because it lacks the element of an objective goal that causally arises out of the inciting incident. ?What becomes the young man's objective goal after the inciting incident, the disappearance of his gRead more
And then what happens?
The logline sets up a situation for a plot. ?But it doesn’t describe a plot because it lacks the element of an objective goal that causally arises out of the inciting incident. ?What becomes the young man’s objective goal after the inciting incident, the disappearance of his girlfriend?
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