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When a clinical study to create a vaccination that lowers heart attack risks accidentally creates a novel deadly flu variant, a medical missionary is forced to team up with the virus’s creators to stop a potential global pandemic that could kill millions. The missionary nun and her spy companions are forced to rely on a brutal Russian biocontainment unit if they are to escape from the Caribbean island’s deranged dictator and find a cure to prevent a global disaster.
This is so interesting! You clearly have a clear understanding of the story you want to write, but less might be more. Cutting down some details about the virus itself could leave more room to talk about the other things. Also removing passive language raised the stakes and hook more people! An examRead more
This is so interesting! You clearly have a clear understanding of the story you want to write, but less might be more. Cutting down some details about the virus itself could leave more room to talk about the other things. Also removing passive language raised the stakes and hook more people! An example using just what you’ve written:
When a clinical study accidentally creates a deadly flu variant, a medical missionary is forced to team up with the virus’ creators to stop a global pandemic. The missionary nun and her spy companions are forced to rely on a brutal Russian bio containment unit if they are to escape from the Caribbean island’s deranged dictator and find a cure to prevent a global disaster.
See lessA housebound vigilante predator catcher has 24 hours to rescue an abducted child before she’s murdered using only the internet and his cell phone.
I like the short length. But something is missing to catch my attention. We must think this is an impossible mission. And with a vigilante predator catcher, the internet and his cell phone…. Well, it doesn’t seem very impossible. What if you change the main character to be a suburban housewife. Or aRead more
I like the short length. But something is missing to catch my attention.
See lessWe must think this is an impossible mission.
And with a vigilante predator catcher, the internet and his cell phone…. Well, it doesn’t seem very impossible.
What if you change the main character to be a suburban housewife.
Or a teenage nerd.
Or a violent boxer who can’t use his physical strength to solve the problem this time…
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When a dystopian future threatens humanity, a reluctant hero must embark on a perilous journey through a series of secret dream sequences, guided by an advanced AI, to uncover the key to saving the world
Make it more personal: It is easier to write when you add relations. What relations is this about? Something like: When a highly decorated retired soldier’s daughter (or wife or son or father) is kidnapped by villains who seek to control the world with artificial intelligence - he finally accepts thRead more
Make it more personal:
It is easier to write when you add relations. What relations is this about?
Something like:
See lessWhen a highly decorated retired soldier’s daughter (or wife or son or father) is kidnapped by villains who seek to control the world with artificial intelligence – he finally accepts the invitation (from his hateful general) to go back to war – using a newly invented dream machine powered by AI.