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Unable to come to terms with her stillbirth, a desperate doula fakes a pregnancy and kidnaps an expectant be mother to steal her baby. Can she kill her or let her go, risking everything.
I second what dpg suggests. Flipping the roles of the prot- and the antagonist creates enoughempathy to follow the chilling story. Making the pregnant woman an illegal immigrant puts her in even more jeopardy and pressure (even before the psychokiller arrives). Plus, it can create an extra level ifRead more
I second what dpg suggests. Flipping the roles of the prot- and the antagonist creates enoughempathy to follow the chilling story. Making the pregnant woman an illegal immigrant puts her in even more jeopardy and pressure (even before the psychokiller arrives). Plus, it can create an extra level if social commentary.
See lessA na?ve but gifted young paralegal working late finds herself trapped in an empty giant parking garage and must defend herself against the shadowy contract killer hired to kill her.
Why is the fact that she's a paralegal relevant? Or the fact that she's gifted? Or naive for that matter? These things should give me some clue as to why someone would go to the length of hiring an assassin to kill her. Or at least suggest how she is going to be able to survive this encounter. SurelRead more
Why is the fact that she’s a paralegal relevant? Or the fact that she’s gifted? Or naive for that matter? These things should give me some clue as to why someone would go to the length of hiring an assassin to kill her. Or at least suggest how she is going to be able to survive this encounter.
Surely, a contract killer would just shoot her from a distance? This is what they does for a living right? She’s just a naive paralegal… so how is she supposed to defend herself against someone who kills people like this every day?
Is this for a feature length or a short? At the moment I’m struggling to see this sustaining a 90mins+ runtime.
See lessThe diagnosis of infertility forces a desperate woman to decide whether she should face the risks of achieving her dream of motherhood at any cost.
"When diagnosed with infertility, a desperate woman kidnaps a baby from the street." Then what? I would start like this: "When she kidnaps a baby from the street, an infertile woman must..." Then, MAIN ACTION is required. She must what? She sounds more like an antagonist. "Must decide" cannot be a MRead more
“When diagnosed with infertility, a desperate woman kidnaps a baby from the street.” Then what?
I would start like this:
“When she kidnaps a baby from the street, an infertile woman must…”
Then, MAIN ACTION is required. She must what? She sounds more like an antagonist.
“Must decide” cannot be a Main Action.
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