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  1. Posted: February 6, 2018In: Thriller

    When FBI agent went to Niger to investigate the death of four America soldiers killed Niger ambush, get into quagmire.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on March 30, 2020 at 7:41 pm

    One thing I see about your loglines; you are writing in the past tense but scrips and loglines are written in the present tense because things happen on the screen, right now. Just some helpful advice

    One thing I see about your loglines; you are writing in the past tense but scrips and loglines are written in the present tense because things happen on the screen, right now.

    Just some helpful advice

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  2. Posted: March 28, 2020In: Thriller

    On the verge of madness, a grieving man attacks his stubborn stepchild, chasing him onto private property, but when the psychotic landowner captures them he must learn to accept and work together with the boy to escape before they are both killed.

    dho1115 Logliner
    Added an answer on March 29, 2020 at 11:02 am

    I assume the grieving man's madness is due to the fact he has to care for his stepchild? Here is another version of the logline you may want to consider: "A quick-tempered man and his stubborn stepchild must set aside their differences to escape when they find themselves being held hostage inside aRead more

    I assume the grieving man’s madness is due to the fact he has to care for his stepchild?

    Here is another version of the logline you may want to consider:

    “A quick-tempered man and his stubborn stepchild must set aside their differences to escape when they find themselves being held hostage inside a deranged psychopath’s secluded property”.

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  3. Posted: March 20, 2020In: Thriller

    A disruptive and mute 8-year-old must battle his abusive stepfather who is persuaded to kill him by the ghost of his recently deceased son.

    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on March 21, 2020 at 3:41 am

    Warned by a ghost that his stepfather is a murderer, a mute boy sets out to prove it. or Warned by the ghost of his stepfather's son that his stepfather is a murderer, a mute boy sets out to prove it.    

    Warned by a ghost that his stepfather is a murderer, a mute boy sets out to prove it.

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    Warned by the ghost of his stepfather’s son that his stepfather is a murderer, a mute boy sets out to prove it.

     

     

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