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After watching his girlfriend struggle with an abusive work environment and her self-esteem coming to shreds over a period of time, an unemployed man who feels indebted to her sets out to confront everyone who mistreats her. Things take a turn when all these people start showing up dead and she becomes the prime suspect of the killings.
Your lead character seems a step away from the action. His girlfriend is the one abused at work, his girlfriend is the one who is the prime suspect. ------------------------------------------------------------------------ "When she is accused of killing an abusive co-worker, a disgruntled workaholicRead more
Your lead character seems a step away from the action. His girlfriend is the one abused at work, his girlfriend is the one who is the prime suspect.
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“When she is accused of killing an abusive co-worker, a disgruntled workaholic, with the help of her boyfriend, must discover who is behind the plot to frame her for murder.”
After accidentally causing the death of her boss, an over-worked, guilt-ridden barmaid must avoid suspicion, while at the same deflecting the advances of her lascivious co-worker
Well-written. I think the logline would benefit from specifying how the barmaid caused the death of her boss. "After accidentally poisoning and killing her boss, an over-worked... etc" Additionally, though this is a more minor point, I think the actions the protagonist take in the story could also bRead more
Well-written. I think the logline would benefit from specifying how the barmaid caused the death of her boss.
“After accidentally poisoning and killing her boss, an over-worked… etc”
Additionally, though this is a more minor point, I think the actions the protagonist take in the story could also benefit from more specificity. Does she try to pin the blame on someone else, for example?
See lessWhen she discovers that she let in a strange being in the guise of her dead son, she will be forced to make a decision, before the damage is greater.
She will be forced to make a decision? I don't know what that looks like on screen.
She will be forced to make a decision? I don’t know what that looks like on screen.
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