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A young woman successfully flees from her stalker ex-boyfriend but, after he kills himself and leaves her his sizable estate, she must decide whether to take the money and risk the wrath of the man’s surviving family, who believe the money is rightfully theirs.
I have to admit I am having trouble coming up with a logline for this. In spite of being based on a true story, the lead still needs a goal, and I am not sure what that is, so it is difficult to try a logline for this. ----- "When her stalker ex-boyfriend commits suicide, an abused survivor reluctanRead more
I have to admit I am having trouble coming up with a logline for this. In spite of being based on a true story, the lead still needs a goal, and I am not sure what that is, so it is difficult to try a logline for this.
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“When her stalker ex-boyfriend commits suicide, an abused survivor reluctantly goes to the will reading in spite of having to face her ex’s vindictive family.”
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However, the logline still needs that ‘one extra thing’.
Three characters, three life stories, integrate as a schizophrenic detective puts together puzzle-pieces in a quest to imprison a split-serial killer posing as Hollywood’s Messiah. — WHOLE
"A schizophrenic detective puts together puzzle-pieces in a quest to discover a split-serial killer posing as Hollywood's Messiah."
“A schizophrenic detective puts together puzzle-pieces in a quest to discover a split-serial killer posing as Hollywood’s Messiah.”
See lessA romancing recluse yachtsman and cameo actress discover one another career tramps team up to fleece the jet set but recluses ex returns to rekindle love with revenge as a IRS sting – SuperTramps
1. What does 'romancing' mean in this context? 2. What does 'discover one another' mean in this context? - more detail needed. 3. I think some punctuation and grammatical correction may be needed here to clarify your meaning and intentions. 4. What is a "Career Tramp"? Is that a grifter? 5. What isRead more
1. What does ‘romancing’ mean in this context?
2. What does ‘discover one another’ mean in this context? – more detail needed.
3. I think some punctuation and grammatical correction may be needed here to clarify your meaning and intentions.
4. What is a “Career Tramp”? Is that a grifter?
5. What is a “jet set” in this context?
6. Perhaps you should give the Yachtsman more detail than being a recluse… after all… once the adventure starts, he’s not particularly reclusive any more, is he? 🙂
7. What has the Yachtsman’s ex got to do with the IRS sting, and why does she want revenge?
8. What is the problem that needs solving and how do they solve it.
9. What is the change/personal challenge that the main character/s need to overcome?
10. Perhaps more detail about the actress’ character? A defining character attribute or flaw?
good luck!
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