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After a terror attack, the highly decorated FBI lead investigator finds his only son was the mastermind. He must choose between giving up his son or protecting him
The main character's dilemma is interesting, but should be understood from the plot instead of being literally spelled out. For example: After a decorated FBI agent discovers his son masterminded a terror attack, he must stop his next planned attack at all costs.
The main character’s dilemma is interesting, but should be understood from the plot instead of being literally spelled out.
For example:
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After his wife commits adultery , a proud South African farmer feels ostracized by his community and forms a codependent relationship with a French anarchistic cult couple that eventually turn violent on him and his family, but his fight for survival comes at tragic cost and he is confronted by the depths of his shame.
As Nir Shelter said: ?the plot is thick and confusing. I'm still not clear on several elements and how they dramatically relate to each other. ?Did?the farmer get involved in the cult through the influence of the French couple? ?Or was its just a defining characteristic of the couple that they membeRead more
As Nir Shelter said: ?the plot is thick and confusing. I’m still not clear on several elements and how they dramatically relate to each other. ?Did?the farmer get involved in the cult through the influence of the French couple? ?Or was its just a defining characteristic of the couple that they members of a cult? ?Covert members — he didn’t know they were true believers until it was too late?
Stripped down to its essence, what is the story about? ?In 25 words or less — forget about a well-formed logline for now– what is the nucleus of the concept around which the entire story–all the characters, all the elements–revolve?
See lessAn ambitious woman takes over her uncle?s struggling restaurant, determined to bring the business back to life. When the staff that don?t meet Wendy?s standards begin to disappear, the remaining employees start to question just how dedicated to her job their new manager might be. You?d better hope you?re on next week?s roster.
Hey Fliss If Wendy is killing innocent people, she becomes a negative character. If there are two other main characters trying to stop the killing, or figure out what is happening to their co workers, they are positive characters. The audience will find it hard to empathize with a negative characterRead more
Hey Fliss
If Wendy is killing innocent people, she becomes a negative character. If there are two other main characters trying to stop the killing, or figure out what is happening to their co workers, they are positive characters.
The audience will find it hard to empathize with a negative character and easy to empathize with the positive ones. I suspect your plot would also be more interesting with an element of mystery introduced by the fact the main characters don’t know what is actually happening.
Perhaps best to re draft the logline from the point of view of the character or characters that are trying to stop the killer.
Hope this helps.
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