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After a tech genius jokingly replies to a scam e-mail, she must go on the run from a murderous prince who wants his twenty million dollars back.
I like the original logline. ?I read it as he thought it was a scam so he set up a fake bank account, gave it to the scammer/prince (who was not a scammer and genuinely needed help -- maybe because he was being held hostage by a gang), and when the money is transferred, he takes it all before the gaRead more
I like the original logline. ?I read it as he thought it was a scam so he set up a fake bank account, gave it to the scammer/prince (who was not a scammer and genuinely needed help — maybe because he was being held hostage by a gang), and when the money is transferred, he takes it all before the gang gets the money. ?So he ends up having to save the prince himself because he can’t go to the cops. ?So he assembles a group of hacker friends to go on a mission to save the prince.
See lessWhile investigating a string of mutilations, the ruthless leader of a post apocalyptic settlement must unravel a brutal plot to overthrow him.
Interesting concept. A few comments, though: If you say the leader is ruthless, the audience would not be on his side, they would actually want the plot to succeed. Maybe if the leader wasn't ruthless, just " tough " would do... In which case, why would anyone want to overthrow him? Perhaps the plotRead more
Interesting concept. A few comments, though: If you say the leader is ruthless, the audience would not be on his side, they would actually want the plot to succeed. Maybe if the leader wasn’t ruthless, just ” tough ” would do… In which case, why would anyone want to overthrow him? Perhaps the plot is led by an outside force… And maybe the leader should change during the story/script (character arc) from being tough, ruthless, to being a better man and a better ruler(not necessarily nicer, just better)…
See lessIn the dawn of e-banking in Nigeria, a troubled and technophobic bank auditor struggles to keep her job but must outwit a disgruntled colleague and onetime master thief bent on sinking the bank.
It seems to me that a fundamental weakness of all 3 versions of the heist story is? this reel story has to compete against real stories, true events, e-thefts of account information and money.? And the truth is stranger than fiction.? What I read in the newspaper is stranger and more dramatically inRead more
It seems to me that a fundamental weakness of all 3 versions of the heist story is? this reel story has to compete against real stories, true events, e-thefts of account information and money.? And the truth is stranger than fiction.? What I read in the newspaper is stranger and more dramatically interesting than anything I can see in these loglines.
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