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The story follows group of friends,each with different idealism and with love for wrong person,as they begin suspecting some of them actually killed their friend who died in an accident.
We need to know number of friends and an event. Think of the Big Chill. Based on that. Four friends come together for a funeral only to start blaming each other for course their friends death. Now describe the friends 1) war veterans 2) college friends You get the picture.
We need to know number of friends and an event. Think of the Big Chill. Based on that.
Four friends come together for a funeral only to start blaming each other for course their friends death.
Now describe the friends
1) war veterans
2) college friends
You get the picture.
See lessA persistent class president investigates the disappearances of multiple female students when she discovers the truth behind an admired teacher who, since the death of his family, has kept the students captive, she manipulates him into a trap that leads her to the missing students.
This tells the story but god is it long. Clear, concise lines are key. Hope this helps.
This tells the story but god is it long. Clear, concise lines are key. Hope this helps.
See lessA young NSA Agent impersonates a government minister at a secret meeting on the global arms trade to terrorists. But when masked gunmen storm the building, their target is not the minister he impersonates, but the NSA Agent himself.
Essentialy the under cover agent discovers that his agency is after him. That's your hook, but I don't think your logline is really expressing this dramatically enough. The whole first sentence can be cut, as it doesn't describe the main plot, all you need to write is: After and under cover CIA agenRead more
Essentialy the under cover agent discovers that his agency is after him. That’s your hook, but I don’t think your logline is really expressing this dramatically enough. The whole first sentence can be cut, as it doesn’t describe the main plot, all you need to write is:
After and under cover CIA agent on a mission is targeted by his fellow operatives he must?
The specifics of his initial mission are unimportant as the inciting incident is the CIA’s attempt on his life. I changed it to CIA as they would likely be more inclined to undertake such operations.
Problem is you didn’t describe the goal, after he realises?that they are after him what MUST he do? This is a crucial element of a logline and needs to be described.
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