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  1. Posted: March 16, 2017In: Thriller

    BLOODLUST When a peace-loving Hindu man witnesses his brother and girlfriend murdered in a convenience store robbery it triggers one of his past lives as an 8th Century Norse Berserker. Now he must fight to control the bloodlust before it destroys him and more innocent lives.

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    Added an answer on March 23, 2017 at 4:06 pm

    BLOODLUST The dormant past life as an 8th Century Norse Berserker is sparked in a modern day peace loving Hindu man after he witnesses his loved ones murdered in a robbery. ?Now he must fight to control the growing bloodlust before it destroys him.

    BLOODLUST

    The dormant past life as an 8th Century Norse Berserker is sparked in a modern day peace loving Hindu man after he witnesses his loved ones murdered in a robbery. ?Now he must fight to control the growing bloodlust before it destroys him.

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  2. Posted: March 23, 2017In: Thriller

    When a rising number of victims are found brutally murdered one by one at a remote Veteran Hospital off the main land, a rookie detective and her seasoned partner must race against time to find the killer but not everyone is who they appear to be.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on March 23, 2017 at 5:13 am

    I believe the idea itself is solid, (Although I am not sure if this would be police jurisdiction or FBI, that could be an issue) I would personalize it. One of the victims should be someone the lead character knows such as her brother or someone she served with in combat. That one specific death shoRead more

    I believe the idea itself is solid, (Although I am not sure if this would be police jurisdiction or FBI, that could be an issue)

    I would personalize it.
    One of the victims should be someone the lead character knows such as her brother or someone she served with in combat.
    That one specific death should be the inciting incident and that will shorten your set-up.
    Because that is the current problem with your logline, there is a lot of set up, which doesn’t leave a lot of room to inform us about story.

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  3. Posted: March 22, 2017In: Thriller

    Things get hot in a Dead Zone for a ?Bad Bug Collector? after an accidental viral release on a tropical island.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on March 22, 2017 at 6:25 am

    I agree with dpg, ?Also you should give us an bad guy. Here would be an example. ?"When the umbrella corporation accidental releases a deadly virus on a remote tropical island..."

    I agree with dpg, ?Also you should give us an bad guy. Here would be an example. ?”When the umbrella corporation accidental releases a deadly virus on a remote tropical island…”

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