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A troubled young woman, tying to outrun an oppressive past, flees to the outback, only to find herself in the way of an ancient malevolent spirit awakened by a thirst for revenge and hell bent on destruction.
What does "...oppressed..." mean in specific and visual terms? How is it relevant to the plot of defeating the monster?This logline is vague and confusing, mostly as a result of it lacking a clear plot and motivation. I suggest reveres engineering the logline from the goal. What specifically does thRead more
What does “…oppressed…” mean in specific and visual terms? How is it relevant to the plot of defeating the monster?
This logline is vague and confusing, mostly as a result of it lacking a clear plot and motivation. I suggest reveres engineering the logline from the goal. What specifically does the MC need to achieve by the end of the story?
See lessWhen a gunman suffering PTSD takes a first year class hostage, two trainee teachers work together to calm both the terrorfied children and the crazed gunman.
I agree with Gabe that the dramatic action line is rather passive and reactive. ?And certainly incomplete.Obviously, one of their 1st tasks would be to calm down the children and talk down the gunman, but surely that isn't the action/conflict that constitutes the entirety of Act 2?What does the gunmRead more
I agree with Gabe that the dramatic action line is rather passive and reactive. ?And certainly incomplete.
Obviously, one of their 1st tasks would be to calm down the children and talk down the gunman, but surely that isn’t the action/conflict that constitutes the entirety of Act 2?
What does the gunman want– what is his objective goal in taking hostages? ?And as a result, what must the 2 teenagers do about it — what becomes their objective goal?
See lessDuring WW2, in occupied France, a former underdog cyclist working for the Resistance must compete in a national race organized by the Nazis to secretly carry out a vital microfilm to the Allied Forces at the Spanish border.
On the matter of language, etc.Even though the American film industry is larger, the larger target market is French, not English. ? Larger target market both in terms of movie producers who would be interested in the producing the film and movie viewers who will want to watch it.Say "Vichy France" aRead more
On the matter of language, etc.
Even though the American film industry is larger, the larger target market is French, not English. ? Larger target market both in terms of movie producers who would be interested in the producing the film and movie viewers who will want to watch it.
Say “Vichy France” and most Americans will have no idea what you are referring to. ? Bottled water, perhaps? ?
Also, because changing demographics in the US population as well the evolution of international markets , Hollyweird made movies are tilting more toward subjects that will sell in Asia (China is now the most lucrative market by far) ?and South America, less toward Europe.
fwiw
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