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A woman stands up one man for another because he is nicer, so she thought. She soon discovers he’s a serial killer and her life depends on the first man to send that psycho to hell.
The "protagonist" has no consequences stacked up against her. She also has no goal. Why is she doing this? Readers can already tell she'll be a flat character. WHO THE STORY IS ABOUT, WANTS SOMETHING VERY BADLY BUT MUST DO WHAT TO GET IT.
The “protagonist” has no consequences stacked up against her. She also has no goal. Why is she doing this? Readers can already tell she’ll be a flat character.
WHO THE STORY IS ABOUT, WANTS SOMETHING VERY BADLY BUT MUST DO WHAT TO GET IT.
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What is the motivation for her to investigate the death? What was so suspicious about the death? However, if the old guy or gal would have disappeared, then the circumstances could be seen as suspicious. Otherwise, sad as it may be, seniors die at a higher rate than members of younger demographics.
What is the motivation for her to investigate the death? What was so suspicious about the death? However, if the old guy or gal would have disappeared, then the circumstances could be seen as suspicious. Otherwise, sad as it may be, seniors die at a higher rate than members of younger demographics.
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Your story seems to depend on a lot of coincidental circumstances and corrupt people conspiring against the young man.A lot.What's the dramatic point you are trying to make having an entire community willfully aligned against the student?
Your story seems to depend on a lot of coincidental circumstances and corrupt people conspiring against the young man.
A lot.
What’s the dramatic point you are trying to make having an entire community willfully aligned against the student?
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