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A frustrated architect works on soulless industrial projects, with the dream of building his ideal building.
Hi, Rick! You’ve got a character flaw and some internal motivation which is great. But now you need an external conflict or opposition.
Hi, Rick! You’ve got a character flaw and some internal motivation which is great. But now you need an external conflict or opposition.
See lessAn incisive detective imprisons a man who is murdered in prison while innocent, so he resigns out of remorse to free unjustly incarcerated people in defiance of the system he once defended.
I would trim it a bit, perhaps something like this: An incisive detective imprisons an innocent man who is murdered in prison, resigns in order to free unjustly incarcerated people defying the system he once defended. When an incisive detective resigns for imprisoning an innocent man who is murderedRead more
I would trim it a bit, perhaps something like this:
See lessAn incisive detective imprisons an innocent man who is murdered in prison, resigns in order to free unjustly incarcerated people defying the system he once defended.
When an incisive detective resigns for imprisoning an innocent man who is murdered in prison, he defies the system he once defended by freeing unjustly incarcerated people.
When a remorseful detective resigns for imprisoning an innocent man who is murdered in prison, he defies the system he once defended by freeing unjustly incarcerated prisoners.
I hope this helps.
about an elderly samurai named Genjiro who doesn’t grow up? He gets taken in by his granddaughter and her partner. He has as a childhood friend and love interest a la Wendy Darling and she also rapidly ages. There’s a girl whom he shares advice with.
This isn't really a logline. The format would be: When [inciting event] occurs, a [character and their description] must [dynamic action] to overcome [obstacle].
This isn’t really a logline. The format would be: When [inciting event] occurs, a [character and their description] must [dynamic action] to overcome [obstacle].
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