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A young Thomas Edison must win the top invention prize at the Worlds Fair to prove to his dream girl and her disapproving father that he is worthy before she marries a wealthy suitor.
I've done a lot of historical work on world's fairs and teach this topic at a university. There are so many things one could do with this. The one thing that comes to mind is that beyond the situation you set up, you could also use the particular genre of this global fair to your advantage. For examRead more
I’ve done a lot of historical work on world’s fairs and teach this topic at a university. There are so many things one could do with this. The one thing that comes to mind is that beyond the situation you set up, you could also use the particular genre of this global fair to your advantage. For example, is there anything about the fact that many countries are present that you can incorporate? Can there be a reference to something that happened at a previous fair somewhere else?
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The logline revisions read as if you're still not sure which obstacle would be most interesting. So, what would you like to write about? Either a vengeful boy learning not to generalise his hate to all Germans or a boy managing to one-up a German captain's security?
The logline revisions read as if you’re still not sure which obstacle would be most interesting. So, what would you like to write about? Either a vengeful boy learning not to generalise his hate to all Germans or a boy managing to one-up a German captain’s security?
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Agreed with csantan2, the logline lacks a clear goal. It could be that he wants to survive but it's not clear what specifically is threatening him. Otherwise, this vaguely describes a situation, not a plot. Best to redraft this one so it specifies an inciting incident and causally connected goal.
Agreed with csantan2, the logline lacks a clear goal. It could be that he wants to survive but it’s not clear what specifically is threatening him.
Otherwise, this vaguely describes a situation, not a plot. Best to redraft this one so it specifies an inciting incident and causally connected goal.
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