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A boy is homesick after moving to another country but has disagreements when telling the parents he wants to go back. He then contemplates suicide
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There’s an interesting story here but there is so much information needed that currently isn’t here. Read a few other people’s loglines and the comments to get an idea what is expected from a logline.
See lessA reclusive, homesick fugitive is told that his son has gone missing. When he also discovers that his vengeful ex-partner in crime has tracked him down, he must come out of hiding in order to protect his true identity and save his son.
"When his vengeful ex-partner kidnaps his son, a fugitive from the mob must come out of hiding in order to rescue his child."
“When his vengeful ex-partner kidnaps his son, a fugitive from the mob must come out of hiding in order to rescue his child.”
See lessAfter her family is killed, a young woman escapes in order to avoid the same fate only to discover a family secret that will soon have her running back home in order to confront those who hurt her family.
The only question I have is, escapes what? Running back home doesn't tell me that was the place she escaped. Plus hurt her family seems a weak description for killing.? You could use "those responsible", saves words. I look forward to reading a rewrite is you post one.
The only question I have is, escapes what?
Running back home doesn’t tell me that was the place she escaped.
Plus hurt her family seems a weak description for killing.? You could use “those responsible”, saves words.
I look forward to reading a rewrite is you post one.
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