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A wandering biker clinging to his small hometown makes the unfortunate decision to rob a bank after a chance encounter with another disgruntled soul. He must deal with his decisions while on the run from both his accomplice and the police.
You might want to clarify a seeming contradiction:1: "A wandering biker," makes it seem like the lead is on the road roaming around2: "Clinging to his small hometown," make it seem like the lead has never left his hometown.And easy fix with a little clarification.
You might want to clarify a seeming contradiction:
1: “A wandering biker,” makes it seem like the lead is on the road roaming around
2: “Clinging to his small hometown,” make it seem like the lead has never left his hometown.
And easy fix with a little clarification.
See lessAfter a empath singer offers to be a surrogate to her long time best friend, who struggles to conceive. She must overcome her guilt when she is told she could not conceive a child of her own due to her actions, and find the ability to accept her boyfriend’s desire to marry her, or lose him forever.
Keymiser:Transgender must be in the logline.? Must, MUST, MUST.? It's your differentiating story hook.And I suggest using the more common term "empathetic" in the logline.? Spell it out.That said, in the script,? definitely develop how her intense awareness of others' feeling plays out as both a chaRead more
Keymiser:
Transgender must be in the logline.? Must, MUST, MUST.? It’s your differentiating story hook.
And I suggest using the more common term “empathetic” in the logline.? Spell it out.
That said, in the script,? definitely develop how her intense awareness of others’ feeling plays out as both a character strength and a character weakness.? For example, a critic of her decision, someone who knows her all too well (like her mother) could point out she’s always been an easy mark, a sucker for a hard luck story.
And she will also be acutely aware of the negative feelings of her boyfriend.? So emotionally she’s caught in a cross-fire, trapped between the horns of a dilemma, damned if she does,? damned if she doesn’t.
Whatever.? My takeaway is that I sense there’s dramatic gold to? be mined in her intense empathy.? (Are you aware of the Myers-Briggs typology? Your character would score at the far end of the feeling spectrum).
Best wishes with your project.
See lessA woman from the Rust Belt strives for fame and glory by entering the Chicago marathon, but after she unexpectedly gets pregnant is faced with a tragic decision.
As Keymiser asked.? What's so tragic about being pregnant?? Yes, it is an inconvenience, a complication to her marathon ambitions.? But how is it the inciting incident to a tragedy?
As Keymiser asked.? What’s so tragic about being pregnant?? Yes, it is an inconvenience, a complication to her marathon ambitions.? But how is it the inciting incident to a tragedy?
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