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A man blackmails a young woman he?ll inform the shelter and care program about her ongoing drug habit, leaving her homeless, unless she becomes his mistress.
INTENTION: to blackmail a woman into becoming his mistress.OBSTACLE: ?I think this might work better from the woman?s angle. Let?s try it out?INTENTION: get clean? get her life back together?OBSTACLE: her drug habit - which is ruining her life in more ways than one.A woman trying to get life back toRead more
INTENTION: to blackmail a woman into becoming his mistress.
OBSTACLE: ?
I think this might work better from the woman?s angle. Let?s try it out?
INTENTION: get clean? get her life back together?
OBSTACLE: her drug habit – which is ruining her life in more ways than one.
A woman trying to get life back together is blackmailed into sex by a man who threatens to inform her shelter and care program about her secret drug habit.
I dunno?
What do you think is the obstacle from the man?s angle? What?s standing in his way??
Intention and obstacle both need to be strong and specific.
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See lessLosing his eyesight gradually due to a rare disease, an introverted painter hurries to finish his last painting to participate in an important exhibition going trough an existential crisis.
This is a really nice premise.So we get the stakes, could you make the exhibition something specific? Like a major biennale for example.The only other note I'll make is that it's not cinematic. Nice premise but ultimately, some guy painting doesn't make for good cinema. Could you inject a conflict?Read more
This is a really nice premise.
So we get the stakes, could you make the exhibition something specific? Like a major biennale for example.
The only other note I’ll make is that it’s not cinematic. Nice premise but ultimately, some guy painting doesn’t make for good cinema. Could you inject a conflict? Perhaps he has to reconcile with his estranged son, daughter, or wife. What if the estranged loved one is the only person he knows/trusts to be his hands and help him finish the painting?
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See less?An emerging artist comes to town to become an art star, but it won’t be easy for him, there he falls in love with a promising young lawyer. A car accident leaves the couple in a coma, only one can live thanks to the heart of the other, and thus be able to fulfill their dreams. ?
It sounds interesting but I'm not clear why the one with the good heart would give it up. Some options to consider: What is the inciting incident? Perhaps it can start from when the heart transplant happens Maybe have a heart donation available from a third party but only one can get it so it becomeRead more
It sounds interesting but I’m not clear why the one with the good heart would give it up.
Some options to consider:
What is the inciting incident? Perhaps it can start from when the heart transplant happens
Maybe have a heart donation available from a third party but only one can get it so it becomes a legal case. What are the stakes/consequences?
Perhaps the artist is brain dead but has his heart functioning thus donating his heart to the lawyer.
What is your theme? Where is it going?
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