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1. When domestic violence is unleashed on her 24 year old self, the social media-ite must defuse his assaults before she’s loved to death.
I don't know what you mean by, 'defuse his assaults'? 'Defuse his assaults' would mean to lessen the severity of his assaults. Make them so they don't hurt as much, so she can live with being assaulted. That seems like either a weird goal or a strange wording of the logline. (Probably the second) --Read more
I don’t know what you mean by, ‘defuse his assaults’?
‘Defuse his assaults’ would mean to lessen the severity of his assaults. Make them so they don’t hurt as much, so she can live with being assaulted.
That seems like either a weird goal or a strange wording of the logline. (Probably the second)
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A hardheaded businesswoman must convince an eccentric maker of wind chimes to sell his land if she hopes to complete her most ambitious real estate development and avoid bankruptcy
Could be tightened if you're open: 1. Focus her profession to save on logline real estate. 2. Up the ante with LOVE 😍 Leaning towards: “A real estate mogul has one week to convince a handsome but eccentric maker of wind chimes to sell in order to avoid bankruptcy” Take care.
Could be tightened if you’re open:
1. Focus her profession to save on logline real estate.
2. Up the ante with LOVE 😍
Leaning towards:
“A real estate mogul has one week to convince a handsome but eccentric maker of wind chimes to sell in order to avoid bankruptcy”
Take care.
See lessA self-made businesswoman risks bankruptcy to complete her biggest real estate project, but everything depends on her persuading a single holdout–an eccentric maker of wind chimes–to sell his land.
Do they fall in love?
Do they fall in love?
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