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Before setting out to bring his estranged daughter back, an embattled doctor questions ethical behavior and makes a fateful decision to cheat the organ sharing waitlist.
I did not read the additional text as the logline should stand alone. Where does the embattled doctor bring his daughter back from? Whose ethical behaviour is the doctor questioning? Who is the doctor cheating the organ sharing (sic) waitlist for? How is bringing his daughter back linked to cheatingRead more
I did not read the additional text as the logline should stand alone.
Where does the embattled doctor bring his daughter back from? Whose ethical behaviour is the doctor questioning? Who is the doctor cheating the organ sharing (sic) waitlist for? How is bringing his daughter back linked to cheating the waitlist?
There is no cause and effect in this logline. There should be an event and as a result, action is taken. Questioning ethics is not an event.
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There's a disconnect here between the inciting incident and the goal. Harvard is expensive... so is she trying to get a scholarship? If so, we kinda need to know that. What relevance does the wager have on her journey to Harvard? If she successfully outwits the two teachers, it doesn't guarantee a pRead more
There’s a disconnect here between the inciting incident and the goal. Harvard is expensive… so is she trying to get a scholarship? If so, we kinda need to know that. What relevance does the wager have on her journey to Harvard? If she successfully outwits the two teachers, it doesn’t guarantee a place in Harvard so what’s the connection?
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In this type of story, typically there is a secondary goal of bringing the real culprit to justice. Because it's a movie, an accident is not really interesting. There may have been a plot behind the killing of this particular patient?
In this type of story, typically there is a secondary goal of bringing the real culprit to justice. Because it’s a movie, an accident is not really interesting. There may have been a plot behind the killing of this particular patient?
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