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When a gay man’s affair is discovered by his alibi wife who only married him to have kids, he must deal with the aftermath of their separation and battle her in court for custodial rights.
You don't want this to be a synopsis, but a logline, so don't give all this info. Attempt to make it more concise: It is assumed, because you say alibi wife, that they married with her knowing he was gay, so why would she be separate? She got what she wanted (kids), he got what he wanted (covering uRead more
You don’t want this to be a synopsis, but a logline, so don’t give all this info. Attempt to make it more concise:
It is assumed, because you say alibi wife, that they married with her knowing he was gay, so why would she be separate? She got what she wanted (kids), he got what he wanted (covering up his sexuality).
See lessThrough the Devil’s envy, sin and death came into the world. Therefore, God sent his Son into the world so that through his death and resurrection, the world might be saved.
Amen brother. Click the "Formula" link in the header for examples on how to bring Presario2200 experience with John 3:16 into a logline :) Take care.
Amen brother. Click the “Formula” link in the header for examples on how to bring Presario2200 experience with John 3:16 into a logline 🙂
Take care.
See lessWhen a dog of a dangerous breed is abandoned in front of Sofia, she decides to take her in, despite the colony of cats she has at home.
Consider the following: 1. Be specific with the breed to orientate the reader. 2. Who is Sofia? At the least "A young woman..." 3. The title is puzzling as adoption is a choice. She can just take the abandoned dog to the pound – end of story. Is there a long-term situation? Example: “A cat lady mustRead more
Consider the following:
1. Be specific with the breed to orientate the reader.
2. Who is Sofia? At the least “A young woman…”
3. The title is puzzling as adoption is a choice. She can just take the abandoned dog to the pound – end of story. Is there a long-term situation?
Example:
“A cat lady must [Action/GOAL] when [Major Event] e.g., stuck with an abandoned pit bull during a pandemic lockdown”
Hope you find this constructive, keep going!
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